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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 8:21 PM Title: Special Memo to Mr. Howard Taylor, Research Analyst in Human Relations Dpt. - First Notice

You're crossing the streams? Well you picked a great story to do it with.

 

Solid chapter my good man.



Author's Response:

Damn straight the streams are getting crossed!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 9:00 AM Title: Special Memo to Mr. Howard Taylor, Research Analyst in Human Relations Dpt. - First Notice

Damn, someone's in trouble. This adds more evidence supporting what we've been predicting, but Listen, before you go brushing this all off like you always do, I know full well I’m in the minority here.  There are enough people around in the Human Relations department and the rest of the company that like what you do is an intriguing conflict that could expand the story greatly.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. That conflict you mentioned there will mostly be kept in the background of this story, but I intend on making its presence felt more and more.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 7:06 AM Title: Special Memo to Mr. Howard Taylor, Research Analyst in Human Relations Dpt. - First Notice

Nothing wrong with a little fun. Plus, if this chapter is the end of volume 1, it makes a nice springboard to the first chapter of volume 2!

Author's Response:

That's a good way to look at it, as there will be another of these chapters after the next cluster of cases.

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