Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 29 – Unlikely partnership

 Nice stuff, Ed cares for Paige but sadly, I don't think she even bothers to return that devotion. 

 

Deborah, Carlos cannot stay shrunk forever, their relationship will not survive it. She needs him back to normal. Hope Jennifer can keep those murderous thoughts out, her husband depends on it now!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Paige has a lot of demons as we will see in the coming chapters. Ed will be instrumental in her facng them. Jennifer's biggest problem is not her thoughts, it's Donna.