[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Missing
Nice chapter. Micro isn't really my thing(no pun intended) but your descriptions were spot on. And the scene with Donna and Jennifer discussing foot fetishes as well as the giantess fetish was amazing. Love their back and forth on the subject, wish more stories had little excerpts like this. This whole story has been so well written and thought out. And Paige shrinking Ed(think his name is) for trying to sabotage her by stealing documents or something, was glad she got that text and didn't squish out right. This mysterious woman in the limo I'm guessing who talked to Paige, she intrigues me. Wonder when we will know her name. I'd be lying if I said I wasn't disappointed that Deborah and Carlos weren't in this chapter. Cannot wait till your next chapter. You're a terrific writer.
aaron
PS I love the length of each chapter as well. Don't change a thing.