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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Like a Glove

Chapter title reminded me of Ace Ventura: When Nature Calls. Scene where he crashes the jeep in the parking spot and says "like a glove" haha... Sorry got all nostalgic.
Great chapter. I really like not only this story but your characters. And with your ominous notes about Deborah not being who Carlos thought she was, I doubt I will be able to stop myself from reading the next chapter. I hope its nothing too sinister but just that she wants him smaller(cause she did seem disappointed that he didn't shrink again). Like I said I will definitely be tuning in for more. Righteous story.

aaron

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