[Report This]Date: June 04 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have enjoyed this story so much, and your ending here was just about perfect. Very few stories have touched on the feminist perspective inherent in an empowered giant woman, and you have done so masterfully here. It's been fascinating watching your story title gradually become more and more true as Lauren descended deeper into madness. You really did a great job making her a three dimensional human, to the point that you can almost sympathize with her monstrous actions. Very well done, thank you for a great story.
Date: June 02 2014 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
This has to be one of the hottest stories ive read in a while. The details you used to decribe things were amazing! I think the part that really stands out to me was when she rubbed her fingers together crushing the shrunken girl between them. Every last detail of what was happening to her was incredible.
It seems as though you may have left this open for a possible sequel?
That would be great if you did!