Reviews For Laurel is Dead
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Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love this. Your descriptions of Laurel's unhinged thoughts strike all of the right notes, mirroring perfectly her increasingly desperate actions that lead to her shrinking her fiancé. He was also spot on, sealing his fate with his fantastically dark phone call. Please, please continue.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

Now thats what im talking about!

Laurel and a shrunk Ryan! Now this story is interesting again.

By the way, it would help if you rename the chapter titles in the future.

Anyway, I cant wait for the next chapter. Good work!

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