Date: March 13 2017 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 31
Fantastic work as always. These last couple of chapters have been great.
Although their personalities are different both girls seem to be getting ever more sadistic, with no anchor amongst the tinies for Laura and only Furio for Janna.
The mystery over their "deaths" at the beginning works very well to raise tension, and I very much liked Furio's diary entry at the end - which works a lot better in PDF format.
BTW, do you prefer comments here or on your Patreon?
Author's Response:
Anywhere is perfect. You're right, PDF allows for more creativity. I ought to thank lfcan for making me do that. Perhaps Deviant art would be best for comments, encurage more people to read and comment as well and get a ball rolling there. Patreon falls woefully short of being a good platform for distribution.
You're also right about Laura and Janna, but don't forget that they are at war and fed up with Thorwal, Janna in any case, as am I, and Horas promises to be different, if it turns out the way Janna envisions. There's a million reasons why it shouldn't and I don't know yet what Scalia's plan is, what the Horasian nobolity will do, the churches, the tradehouses and Gareth. Will be a lot of fun figuring that out though.