[Report This]Date: February 06 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Christmas in Feb. Love all the new chapters. These newest chapters have been awesome. Cant wait for more!
Date: February 06 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh goodness, what a great surprise! 2 updates in 2 days!! (^o^)/
These 2 new chapters are awesome!
First we saw what's going on with Laura and now this terrific chapter with Janna.
Thanks a lot man!
Back in Laura's Chapter, I was really glad to see one of the "deities" of this world coming to fight against her.. even if it wasn't an actual god, it makes me think that gods are still around and that there are strong powers that the girls should not underestimate.
Though, the fact that she killed (quite easily) the demi-god, makes even more clear the magnitude of her power.
Yes, these collossal, beautiful, murderous ladies relies a lot in their physical crushing superiority.. but a little more brain would be better if they want to live longer.
For example, if instead of a narcotic, there was a strong poison in her drinks, Laura would be dead by now.. this should make her think that having trustworth allies could be a good thing.
As for Janna, she's really a living rollercoaster.. she goes from killing-machine to sadic-bitch and back to sensitive woman in no time.. ;)
Rondria.. :(. ...I have to say that, by knowing your style, I knew that a death among the "nice" people was behind the corner. XP
Crap, the moment in which Rondria dies is so unexpected and quick, that it hits the reader like a punch in the stomach. Great job in full "game of thrones" style.
Finally, even I'm very curious to know what's going on in Laurasville, but I can't wait to see what will happen when Janna and Laura will meet again.
Thanks for your huge awesome work.
PS: I know it's off topic.. but.. have you seen this: http://fav.me/daujqi4 ? :3
Author's Response:
Thanks, you've given me lots to consider! I'll look into your challenge as well, though I can't promise anything. Time is so limited and writing eats time like nothing else. It's like being on drugs. You start and all of a sudden it's the next day, you have work to do and haven't even slept. It's killing me. I've actually gotten really sick over writing these chapters. It takes more of a physical toll than I think most people would expect.
You're right about that scene with Laura. I don't think Swafnir expected anything like that happening either.
You're right about Janna too. She reminds me of Joan from Mad Men in a vague way. There's very few people she holds dear and those she protects. The others she is very indifferent to, distant, even cruel.
If you ever want to do any artwork based on this please feel free to do so. I'm a great fan of your work.
Date: February 06 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no! Poor Rondria. And poor Furio too. This will clearly change him forever, but the question is whether it will have any lasting effect on Janna. What she does with the giantesses will be the first indication of that I guess. Or perhaps just that cutting last line.
And two new chapters in one weekend as well! The one with Laura was just as harrowing and I'm desperate to see Thorgun get his comeuppance. He's clearly affecting Janna's mind for much of the chapter, but I had hoped Furio would be able to help when he arrived with Janna. But perhaps not now...
The writing in this story continues to transcend the requirements of mere fetish fiction. Given the themes involved I'm imagining that at some point one of the girls is going to learn magic, but the best thing about all this is how unpredictable it all is.
Even if that means favourite characters dying unexpectedly…
Author's Response:
I do so love your reviews, but you're nearly always wrong in your predictions. Furio is catatonic right now, but I tink he'll be fine. Remember, there's a whole lot of shit going to go down.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
Whoa! It's weird seeing a monster like Jenna showing even some semblance of human empathy for someone else. I don't know why but despite how cynical I am about this story I really DO enjoy it, so don't think I don't. I have a love/hate relationship with violent gts. I think it's sexy and erotic but at the same time I usually hate the characters so much that it can even end up ruining my enjoyment of a story. I know, I know, what a contradiction no? Anyway this is still a favorite for me, violent gts and all!