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Reviewer: Springer Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

I have to admit I was a bit unclear here, on exactly how much Janna's mind was being manipulated. And whether any of it was new, or just the lingering results of her first encounter with Furio.

I don't like to see either of the giantesses being submissive but it was an interesting chapter and a nice set-up for the future direction of the story.

Furio continues to be the most endearing male character, and the tragi-comic final scene was great.



Author's Response:

Furio did cast the Bannbaladin when Janna chose to interrupt the meeting but obviously the effect was over at the end of the conversation.

Thanks for your reviews. I wish there were more readers like you.

Reviewer: writer27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 22

Two chapters in one weekend....omg omg omg omg.   :) very nice! This may be tip jar worthy sir.

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