Date: October 03 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm sorry to not have commented or reviewd it anymore.
Crap, I never imagined that you already written 2 more awesome chapters from the last time i passed by. ^^;
Anyway, I'm glad you did it and I'm glad you're having fun in writing this, cause I swear you that I'm having even more fun in reading it. :)
Now, with both the titanic ladies out of sight, it was time that someone came out in search of Vengyr. Though.. it seems to me that they are taking a little too much time.. and that's not healthy at all. ^^;
Thanks a lot for your amazing work, it's simply awesome! *thumbsup*
[Report This]Date: September 16 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok caught up. I really do love this story and I love Janna and Laura. All the skipping about in this story can make it hard to read at times, but it is still amazing. Whatever happened with Steve and Christina? Is this story going to stay on this planet or go back to where they came from?
Great story! I cant wait until you can get to posting more!
Author's Response:
Wow, you are a quick and determined reader. Kudos.
Steve and Christina are stuck in Lauraville for now.
[Report This]Date: September 15 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is the best story ever written on here most probably, please do not stop expanding it. Your unique style and core idea are amazing. I'm sure there are thousands anticipating readers craving after every new chapter you add to this masterpiece
[Report This]Date: September 14 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
I mean, I don't know how many times I can say how much I like this story. Its fantastic that it is more than just, "A short, do the job kind of story". It a well written thought out scenereo that happens to involve the fetish. I have to admit there were a few months there where I really thought this died and went to great story heaven to be left like an unfinished diamond like so many others. I checked daily for months waiting for updates. And on literally my birthday this year you came back :) I will say I thought Rayades was surely going to survive and we were going to see a more human side to the monster. It makes me really curious whats going to happen with Steve and his surviving compatriot. Surely their disappearance has been noticed where they are from by now. I'd personally like to see some sort of communicae or additional characters possibly from the rescue mission (giant or otherwise) introduced. Possibly some repercussions for their behavior or the threat of some and how it would impact things. I mean, there really is no going back from what they have done. In any case I am sure you have this thought out already so not much more I can really say.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I have a lot of ideas floating around my head about your suggestion, one crazier than the other. I don't dare go there yet, but I must eventually.
Steve and Christina went on a similar mission to Laura and Janna's and Valerie was their pilot. They were sent to a planet nearby where they picked up the distress call and went to help. Back on earth nobody would miss them yet, think how long it would take for them to get back. But as you mention it, I don't know, might be other class mates on similar missions picked up the signal too. I don't know yet.
Date: September 14 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just read the latest chapter, and saw the note about reviews.
I've tried to contact you multiple ways before, via GiantessCity and this site, but with no reply.
I left a tip and I just want to say that your stories are easily the best I have ever read in Giantess fiction.
It's a hugely impressive tale, with belivable characters and compelling backstories.
That said, I feel absolutely crushed (no pun intended) that Rayadés didn't make it in this chapter. I was almost shouting at the screen for her to speak up.
I wish she'd made it through to become friends with Laura, but I suppose that only illustrates the quality of your writing when I care that much about a minor character.
I hope you continue this story for a long time to come and do not become discouraged at the lack of feedback.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. THIS is what keeps authors going.
I really wanted to know if someone would like Rayadés. I loved and hated her at the same time. For once, her parts basically wrote themselves within minutes and she got the most thorough backstory of any character thus far. I wanted her to be observant, modest and feminine, but she was just so utterly in the wrong place that it hurt.
I am so sorry I did not see your message on GTS world. I barely spend any time over there anymore and the notification is just tiny. There is no private message system on THIS site, is there? I sent you a reply with a little goodie. Thanks again.