[Report This]Date: July 28 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Spectacular chapter. Thorsten is a fucking legend. No Janna or Laura in this chapter but so fucking what. This chapter put me on the battlefield with León and Thorsten. The way it started with them infiltrating Diego's faction blew my socks off. I didn't expect that at all and that whole thing was written perfectly, especially when they were discovered too. The chapter was a non-stop roller coaster ride and I loved every bit of it. And the mountain men stuff was better still because Thorsten shows why he's a badass. One thing I will say is that when you described Thorsten this chapter I always pictured Bjorn from Vikings(and I was kinda close).
They make it to the settlement or Lauraville and Dari has Nagash squash all except León and Thorsten. I wouldn't put it past Nagash to try and finagle Dari by squishing some random villager in place of Diego, don't know as to why yet but I wouldn't put it past her(I'm only jumping to conclusions because he was the only one face down).
Again great story and can't wait to see what happens next or what will happen when Janna and Laura eventually move.
aaron
PS how did Christie and Steve get back into the village after Janna put them on her pillow? I actually wouldn't have asked but the bar wench that Laura squished under her foot made it down from the bed too but was unable to make it outside. Not trying to nitpick.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot!
Yes, I head Bjorn in mind when I wrote Thorsten. He's young and naive but fighting just comes naturally to him. But Diego was the only one squashed face UP, indicating that Nagash made it more personal since he had been an enemy of Dexter. Also, I wrote twice that Janna had put Christina and Steve in the village. The reason is going to be explained in the next chapter, but it is pretty obvious I think.
Thanks again for your review(s). You never miss to leave one and I am very grateful for that.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
The more I read this story and the more the things gets interesting.
Now we can see some pieces of the puzzle coming into place. For example I liked how you managed the encounter between Dari, Thorsten and Leon, and I liked a lot the way in which you made them prove that they were not lying.
Anyway, the more the story proceeds and the more I have the feeling that it is a wonderful giantess-version of the "game of thrones".
Perhaps did you got inspired by it? ;)
Anyway, now the chapter is over and I'm here again, waiting for the next and wondering how long will be the wait. >.<
Awesome job, as always! *clap hands*
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks a bunch. Yes, GoT inspired me quite a bit. I'm already heavily into the next chapter. Shouldn't take too long (so only a few months maybe, lol). I could post more, smaller chapters. That way I'd certainly get more views and reviews but I feel that it could hurt the overarching storyline. In a long chapter, I often back to the end and alter things to make the whole thing more round.
Thanks for the review, it means a lot to me.
Date: July 15 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
Pretty good chapter, but no GTS content unless you count the Nagesh stuff. Not my favorite chapter not gonna lie, but this story is still one of my favorites!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
I have been checking this story hoping for updates for MONTHS. Literally, eagerly waiting to see something. This update literally happened on my birthday and I have to say its the best present ever. Thank you. This chapter was a LONG read and, a lot of otherness aside from giantess stuff. And I would be upset but it was very well written. Bravo man bravo. Please continue some of us are on our seats waiting.