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Reviewer: SoylentGreen Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

It is surprising how hard it is to like the main characters even with a relativel interesting cast of minor and side characters. Laura and Janna bounce back and forth between levels of sadism without much warning or cause. Janna strts off as trying to be a good person does an unexplained 180 and becomes far more evil than the Laura, who simultaneously has become unexplicably smart and a forward thinker, establishing her own city. The main characters and ther descent into outright malice is quick and sudden with Laura and without a whole lot of reasoning behind it despite how the story enjoys to point out every so often that they are supposed to be students and scientists.

The world around them is interesting with a surprising amount of backstory and thought put into it for a size fic, but the min characters remain very unlikeable while many side characters who ever share the spotlight end up dead, especially if they act nice or reasonable. The setting is presented as cruel but the main characters, who are not from the main setting, quickly show themselves as far, far worse. They eventually find others like them and have a respect for Steve in particular though that is short lived and outight destroyed when the story falls victim (again) to a very common type of character. You know the ones that are too stupid to live. The distressed Valerie comes to mind, among a number of other annoying 'asshole characters who hate the main characters for no particular reason except  that they are giant and continue to do so when it is very obvious these mino characters are doing the life-span lengthening equivalent of playing chicken with a freight train' we see so often.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you very much. This is the most useful review I recieved, ever. 

What I wanted to convey is the fact that power corrupts. People who have power of others have almost always been cruel, the evidence ranges from social experiments over the men and women who guarded Germany's concentration camps right up to mother Theresa who let people die in horrifying agony for her personal gain. In my reading of history, good people are a dwindling minority and so it should not come as a surprise that two failed college brats turned out on the evil side even though they remain in constant conflict with the moral education they recieved from their parents, teachers and society at large.

This conflict is supposed to be a main element of this story.

I'm glad that you apreciate the side characters and (not to spoil too much) I am looking forward on building on them more heavily in the future. I had to come up with a few that I liked first, though, and the reason for the first few dying like flies (next to my binge reading of game of thrones) is the fact that I simply didn't like them very much.

 

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 11

Any updates on this cliffhanger? Hope all is well.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

I don't wanna say this is my favorite chapter because you've so many outstanding ones but this is definitely up there. I love how Laura managed to scare Valerie, Christina and Steve straight without killing one of them. Now they are basically their personal servants/slaves and since their only way of communicating was destroyed, they can do absolutely nothing about it. I can't wait to see Laura or even Jenna have some alone time with Valerie, hope they make her be their pet or sex toy.

I also enjoyed hearing about, in the other chapter, how the human kingdoms are rallying to try for some kind of gambit against these titanic giantesses. That is shaping up quite nicely.

The only thing that seems a little off is that Jenna and Laura kept the dead giants around to study even though the male was starting to decompose and most likely smell awful. Well in retrospect it makes sense to have at least one on hand to study because thats what they were there for originally but the gross smelly male ginger? I'm not necessarily saying they wouldn't've had him there but maybe kept him in some kind of case, I don't know. My main concern would be the spread of disease with all those corpses around and the smell wouldn't be far behind.


Anyways, sorry for going off on some weird tangent because I really like this story and could never hope to write something half as good.

aaron
PS one thing I'd like to see is have Laura or Jenna force a tiny male to fuck a female while in the palm of their hand or maybe on the table so that they could get super close and see exactly whats going on and if they are enjoying it.
Also would be sexy as hell if they forced Laura's town to construct a giant dildo that could somehow transport tinies within it.

My only regret is that I wish I could give you more than 10 stars.

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