This isn't as thorough a review as I would've wanted but I'm strapped for time...

I cannot wait to see what Janna has in store for the raiders and Nagash especially after Dari escaping her. A pissed off giantess who's possibly horny is headed straight for them and I cant wait. The scene of how Dari escaped the giant man and killed him was awesome but I really enjoyed how Janna was just toying with her until she stabbed her a second time, luckily she was teleported away just in time to only aggravate Janna even more. But most of all I just loved the idea of Laura having her own town where she reigns supreme. And Bistal(believe that was her name) had to give her an orgasm for surviving being swallowed lol. That was cool. But what's astounding is that she achieved this outcome not once but three times for the horny giantess with freshly shaved pubes(yet another great scene). I was almost hoping Laura would make her Forman and squash foreman(live his name btw) and his family.
Now I think Janna is a true goddess(for all intents and purposes she is) and she believes this as well which makes it that much more sexy. The beginning was boring but completely necessary. I really like this new Dari character.(which means she's more than likely dead come next chapter lol)

What an amazing story. And I for one love long detailed chapters.
Also hope Janna takes Daisy as well as Nagash as her personal pets/slaves but kills and or maims the other raiders.
Would personally love to see a scene where Laura's tiny town(Lauraville I love that btw) has her citizens paint her toenails as well as Janna's.

At any rate truly spectacular chapter and story. I cannot wait for more.


aaron
PS I wonder if more will come through the portal? But the idea of having to return them or the world blows up is kinda cool.

Holy shit. Simply amazing. I loved this long action packed chapter. I'll give you a more thorough review when I have spare time but this story has taken for the better in my opinion.

aaron
PS wish I could give you more stars. And for what its worth I absolutely love long chapters and I commend you for that(long chapters don't seem to be appreciated here for whatever reason).