Date: May 21 2020 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Its quite a leap for a righteous girl like Janna suddenly decide to eat people alive
[Report This]Date: September 15 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oooohhh this Ludwig guy has Janna under his spell! What is he gonna get her to do? A little hard to do the back and forth, but it's neat to get both sides
[Report This]Date: May 29 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great stuff. Interesting that Janna despite being the "good" one might actually be more dangerous to the little ones, considering how easily she can be manipulated.
Always cool to explore the consequences of the power difference with more than direct confrontation. The leaders now have to accept that everything they can accomplish is nothing compared to what the weakest can do with a giant's ear. With Janna's "benevolence" messing up the tiny society and Laura having her dark fun... it's all gonna be great.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Janna seems to be beginning a turn for a darker path even if it's not her fault, which given how Laura treats them isn't a great thing.
Author's Response:
Not to worry. I think she's just prone to being manipulated. I guess the crash, lack of food and this foreign, cruel, medieval world are just a bit too much for her at the moment.