Reviews For The Beach
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Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: To the Beach

I really think you should continue this story I love it really we'll written and all round good story. Hope to see more soon :)

Reviewer: highheight Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: To the Beach

please don't stop writing this one and finish it, I love this story :P

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: To the Beach

I could definitely read more of this. Although I'd prefer if this was just his stepmom and not biological mother.(that's just me though) That being said I like how these two characters interact with each other. Was wondering is she around 6ft, and since he's only 13 and very light(sitting on her tummy) is he under 3ft? But like I said I like your writing style and hope to see more.

aaron
PS will this story mainly take place at the beach or will they go back home later?

Author's Response:

That is actualy a good idea for the mother bit. And hes around 3 feet in order for later bits. And yes, this will be going to places outside the beach, if of corse I can keep this up :3

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: To the Beach

Welcome!!  I look forward to more from you.

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: To the Beach

Welcome!!  I look forward to more from you.

Reviewer: Tushy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: To the Beach

Great start! Go or it!!!

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