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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2018 8:49 PM Title: Bad For Teacher

 

My personal quam with many giantess videos is lack of follow through.  It seems once the woman pulls up her tight pants or lowers her dress she simply walks off and that's the end.  It would be nice to watch her go about for a few minutes knowing that he's tucked away up in there.  She could go about her living room, sit on the couch reading, enjoy a drink in the kitchen, go out for a walk with the camera following behind her at butt level, drive off, talk with her girlfriend on the phone about having a date / sex later and she never even mentions the guy up her butt, etc.

 

I do appreciate your scripts.  I wrote several scripts myself and though I believe they (TaylormadeFEMDOM) tried to keep close to my story lines they always seem to vary in ways that fall short of the mark.  I do not fault Mistress Taylor, quite the opposite.  Trying to put to video someone else's vision is not easy.

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Author's Response:

I understand that mentality. However, every minute is a dollar, and I think there's a lot of people out there would be upset about spending a few extra minutes where the girl is just being normal and not even acknowleding the tiny person up her butt. I personally would be someone like that. Even in stories when the girl is off doing something else, I like to hear her thoughts about the tiny guy up her butt. If it wasn't extra money though I totally say that I think that should be included in most clips.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2018 8:09 PM Title: A Deal With the Devil

I saw this video.  When I watched it I couldn't help but lament that such a potentially great script was lost to such poor and detached acting.

Perhaps they can redo it with Alexis.  You could always change the script a little so the two are not so close in content; like by having the devil's deal for his soul being to condemn the shrunken man to eternity between her asscheeks with his face up against / in her asshole knowing how smelly it is there, only to find out after she inserts him and uses her telepathy that he thinks he's in heaven.  The devil gets frustrated at his adoration and worship of her asshole; but the deal was struck and now he's stuck and the devil's out of luck (he he he).



Author's Response:

I don't think Alexis does clips any more. However, maybe one day I'll write a different version of a script and we can see a girl who truly feels like the devil!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2018 6:38 PM Title: New Year Resolution

Any feet related scripts/clips?

Author's Response:

Not much of a foot person. Usually my foot stuff is very minor. 

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2014 4:47 PM Title: New Year Resolution

If there ever was a way for a girl to be convinced to keep a tiny man in the back of her panties, this is one of the ones that make sense.

he shrinks while she's coplaining about men, if hes in front she might  turn him on, she needs to put men 'behind' her, all her ex's are assholes, all the signs point to it.

 

the only unbelievable part was that guy was her friend. most women wouldnt do that to their friends. unless they were only pretending to be there friends. For future reference try using a: stranger, neighbor, ex, delivery guy, friend of a friend, Rival, or a guy she secretly hates or a guy shes's only friends with because her other friends like him so much but she lets him know she hates him.

 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 10:49 PM Title: New Year Resolution

I loved that story change happens.... It was awesome!! I miss your work!! Your booty writing is awesome!!! I wish that it was possible to continue change happens.. But alas that story is over :( I just miss it

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