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Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Man Down

Guess I was wrong. Looks like the BSS goons did get there first to set off the traps.

That was...strange. I mean, she captured three of them alive, and felt bad about having to kick one of them, and nearly crushing another in her fist. Still, she was very eager to stomp the first man who came through the back door. It almost feels like her Aura persona took over to make the first kill, and her previous timid demeanor stepped in to save the rest? Just seems a bit weird to me.

Just when Martin was hoping for a lead, he loses 4 guys. Ahh well. Now Aura has 4 toys(including Bob) to keep her satisfied for a while.

Even though there's been more crushing than I would have liked, I'm still enjoying this story a lot. Eager to see more!



Author's Response:

The idea was that Aura, being greatly afraid of the four large men and the consecutive loud noises, lost control dude to the fear and impulsively killed the first man (stomping him again and again as if she can't stop herself), and then the she had that little encouter with the driver. She then saw the driver shrinking down, and knowing that he was the last man (3 heaps of clothes + the driver shrinking) she overcame the fear and then went on to collect the men alive so she can have her time with them. So the first death wasn't really what she'd wanted but she didn't care that much about it either!

Also, she again reacted out of fear of losing the bald guy (the runner) 'cause he could become an important witness later on, and she "prefered" them alive, but even if the runner had dieded then and there, I don't think she would sweat it! :D

It is possible that this whole "I want to have my fun with the tiny ones but if they die who cares" idea wasn't as vivid in words as it was in my mind.

Yea I figured you're more into more gentle stuff like vore/mouth play or maybe a little exploration? I myself am more into crushing (obviously :D ) but I like the rest too and I did try to add as much variety to Aura's experience with tiny people as I could.

Again, appreciate the reviews ;)

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Date: June 05 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Many Peaks of Blue Peak City

Damn. She should've kept John alive for a bit longer. Now she's stuck waiting for who knows how long. Too bad her trap won't be set off by a BSS operative like she'd hoped. The question is: Will it be set off by Ryan and Summer, or Bob's friend, Tony?

Speaking of Bob... He better be doing something productive in that bedroom if he wants to live through his punishment. He's needs to find a way to make Aura want to keep him around.

*Read Chapter End Notes*

Fuck yeah! :-D



Author's Response:

Truth be told I hadn't thought about Bob trying to please Aura to avoid the punishment, awesome tip! thanks. Bob had better figure something out ;)

Yea most people prefer gentle giantesses over mean ones like Aura ( unfortunatly :p ) 

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Date: June 05 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Therapized!

I noticed that Morgan referred to his receptionist as 'my Clara'. Does that mean that they were in a relationship? Or possibly married? In either case, it's still horrible that they had to die. Aura doesn't seem to care that she's murdering people. Sure, she didn't like her therapist, but the receptionist was just meanless slaughter. Only for the purpose of pleasure. This concerns me, as I was hoping that perhaps Bob might survive.

The mouth play was fantastic! And I'm also glad you didn't elaborate on what happened to Morgan after Aura swallowed him, since digestion is quite terrifying.

Glad you're keeping up with this story, because I find it very interesting. I've fallen behind in reading this, and will be reviewing the chapters seperately, as you're clearly not getting enough reviews for your effort.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad to see that you've actually kept reading and reviewing this story. It means a lot, thanks  =D

Morgan wasn't supposed to say "my Clara" there, it somehow got overlooked during the proof reading, my bad >.< thanks for pointing that out! I just fixed it....

I agree with about digestion, it's the only part of macrophilia I don't like.

Again, I appreciate the time you put into reading and reviewing this story =)

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Day 2 in Blue Peak City

Wow...Martin is such an ass. I assume it has something to with his sense of professionalism, but still, he could at least learn the names of his subordinates.

I feel for Bob. He just lost what might have been his best friend, and shortly afterward he was raped. I hope he lives, because so far Aura's found several fun uses for him. And she also admitted that she planned to keep him around even longer. Honestly, he needs to live...so that we can enjoy his experiences. :D

Is Emilia reinventing herself? I doubt she'd need to give Bob a false name, considering his situation. And her phychologist will recognize her easily, but perhaps she plans to shrink him anyway.

Dominating tiny men is sure to help relieve her feelings of inferiority.

 

 



Author's Response:

Haha yea, Martin could've refered to his subordinates by their names, but that's what he sees them, as "subordinates" and prefers to keep as much an emotional distance from them as he can, (at least that's my guess :D )

No, Emilia is using the name Aura because: 1. She doesn't want to give any clues as to  her ture identity when commiting crimes, at least to the people who don't know her, in case they get away, because she's too smart to leave any clues. and 2: It implies a symbolic change of roles to her, from Emilia: The belittled average girl to Aura, the dominant, strong and brazen girl who is in control

Bob has got lucky so far, and he's had to endure the only "gentle" aspects of giantess-tiny relationship so far -at least as gentle as it gets! - so I hope he survives too, but Emilia (Aura to him) is so pissed!

I Appreciate your review and comments as well as  the fact that you actually kept reading!

Cheers ;)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Case

I like this. Hope to see more.

aaron

Author's Response:

thanks you!

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Case

Dialogue in italic? Now that's something I don't see very often, and I like it.

Crush scenes aren't my favorite, but hopefully now that Emilia has successfully tested her formula, she'll have more ideas on how to enjoy shrunken men. Then again, perhaps she's just looking to get rich off of it, and she's willing to deal with anyone who gets in her way.

This is definitely a neat story you've started. A very interesting idea.

It's also very well written, considering that English is not your first language. A small amount of spelling mistakes, but I barely noticed.

I'm eager to see more!

 



Author's Response:

thank you for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated ;)

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