Reviews For The Safe Zone
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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Lights Go Out

Great story and Excellent chapter. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Lt_Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

Will this stay unaware and will it have more buttcrack?



Author's Response:

  There will be plenty more unaware.  That's my fav, but there will maybe be some aware also.  And more of everything.  Everything will get repeated in different ways.

 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

YOU ADDED FARTING!! That was a great chapter and I love this story... Farting is too much for most authors... But you aren't afraid to add it! I love that! Add more gas if you can!! I was going to mention it today but you surprised me yet again and blew me away!! Lol I love this story!!!!

Author's Response:

 You're not the only one who get blown away.  :D  Get it?

Reviewer: LostSoul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

This story is really good. I love unaware and this story seems to do it really well. Like the other folks, I love me some butts :P, as well as breasts and legs. Your descriptions are really well done, a personal thing I like, if you're willing to accomodate, are descriptions around the giant articles of clothes for females. Giant panties, bras, and jeans, etc. Anyways, good story and look forward to seeing more!



Author's Response:

 I'll try to incoprorate that a lil more

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Light Toe Molestation

These are some good chapters. Especially if people like booty and feet.

As for shower scenes, im also not that into it, but many people like it when the giantess uses the tiny as a bar of soap and scrubs her wholy body with him.

This time, I want to read about your idea that could spice it up. Im looking forward to it.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

Thank you for the mention in the way you did that was awesome!!!! By the way... I loved the chapter.. Soo much booty sooo awesome! As long as there is butt every few chapters or every now and again.. And that part of the story isn't forgotten il keep reading. Still a great story and I love how his sister is unaware!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

In response to your response to my review, I was thinking that if women are that obsessed with men and that harrassment/rape occur often; maybe Mandy would come over just to see Dusty to make sure he is okay. She probably doesnt want to lose him to an other girl.

Besides, "you cant separate true love". Mandy's separation from Dusty might cause her to find him and get him.

Now that you brought up the far locations, maybe there could be an airplane scene where Mandy "accidently" takes Dusty with her, and the plane is filled with all women. Thats quite a scene!

I enjoy your setup so much! It really seems like a world full of women all for one man!

Author's Response:

 I probably need to reread my chapter, but I meant to imply that Rape has gone -down- due to the enforced sperm donations.  While there are still sex craved women out there, a lot more are satisfied to buy sperm to have children.  It was a necessary step.  Otherwise people would fight over who gets the baby-maker, not wanting their genes to die out.

Also, I like your idea for a plane ride.  Honestly, I was leaning toward Dusty somehow getting mailed over there to them.  That could be better though.

There's also the two-sided coin that while some women desire men, not just norms, there are others who hate them.  I mean, if it's not against the law to murder them, why should they have any rights at all, and what's to stop someone from having a little fun?

Dangerous world out there for Shrinkees. 

Reviewer: Lil Speck Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

 I got really into the writing and just went through one chapter after another.  I think I'm going to take a time out and edit them a little.  Using bold when I feel it looks cool, correcting misspelled words, etc.

  This wasn't written before hand.  I just fel like writing and then did.  I post each chapter as soon as I'm finished, and I'm trying to keep with a theme:

Safe Zone.  Every time Dust thinks he's safe, things sour out.  Maybe not as rapidly as they have been.

Anyways thanks for the comments and suggestions.  I can make this very intereactive by incorperating your ideas.  I don't have a set-in-stone story.  I just wanted to create a virtual playground to explore, you know?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Going Out Like The King

Great set up and story so far. Im a fan of MILFs, panties and insertion.

So the best situation that I would enjoy would be Mandy coming over to see what is wrong, and then Dusty tries to get her attention, but gets stuck somewhere on her(you pick where). Mandy gives up and unawaringly takes Dusty to her house where Mandy's mom lives. Then I would like to see some panties, insertion stuff with Mandy's mom.

I know that wont likely happen soon, but it is just a suggestion.

As for your question at the end of the chapter; I think a large piece of of poop plops right next to Dusty and he goes flying up, out through the toilet, in between Kelly's legs(as if there is a gap in front of her vagina.). Then Dusty lands on the bathroom floor scrambling away from the toilet.

Author's Response:

 I don't wanna give anything away but I do have plans as to when Mandy&Co will be coming into the story.  The thing is, it's an online relationship, so she's actually several states away. :(

For you, though, I -will- add some Milf stuff and some insertion! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

Wow! This could be a movie!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Entering The Safe Zone

Awesome so far! Can't wait for the next chapter. Also the description said there was going to be butt in the story! YESSSS!!! Butt stories are always good!! Keep the chapters long and have a lot of butt action and I'll keep reading!! Feet is good too but booty is better lol

Author's Response:

 Thanks for the review man.  You know what they say about great minds.  "Great minds love great ass"  or something like that.

I can't promise that all of the chapters will be super long but I already have another cooked up.  This should lead up to something you might like.  Lemme know. 

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