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Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2017 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 9: Only to strike out

Wow, poor Keyla, what a way to go. I gotta say, I was really pulling for her to survive somehow. That said, you did an outstanding job with this story. The amount of detail you went into, and the character of Keyla were top notch. Thank you for writing such a great story, I look forward to seeing more Micro Inc. in the future.



Author's Response:

I honestly tried think of ways to save her but with the heat seal tek idea I kind of wrote myself into a corner. Trying to keep it realistic she wouldn't have lived.

Thank you for all the feed back! I'm glad you liked the story. I read all the reviews and it makes me happy people have such high praise. The story did a lot better than I thought it would. Thank you again for reading

 

On a side note: Not sure who the next one is going to follow or maybe I'll do a compilation of character's. 

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