[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wednesday-Thursday-Friday?????
Date: May 05 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was an interesting turn of events. I was not expecting that. Nice work.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow.. Loads to take in in this chapter... Would be great if you put pictures in
Author's Response:
Ok I'll post them up come next chapter so everyone can get a good look at who were dealing with.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Kill him. Kill him now. I don't even care about the plot, Jaden's secret, or Tasha's similarly psychopathic behavior. The fact that this asshole's very existence has ruined the lives of everyone he has ever met in what I assume has been the last decade, makes me angry. Seriously, the mere mention of Ryan by the characters pissed me off immediately.
Also... I don't remember who Tasha is. Is she s new character ir were we introduced to her a while ago. Can you refresh my memory then? Also, she might have to die depending on how close she is to Ryan. Cause if his evil spreads, all who touch it must die as well.
Author's Response:
The hate is strong with in you...my son.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
I would be lying if I said I didn't see that coming, but still a good chapter, maybe a few more sexual scenes would be nice, and the images would be nice as well.
Author's Response:
They will come my friend...they will come.