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Reviewer: Kosmita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Round One

I really like where this is heading. I'm almost unsure what Melanie will do to David. I really like the scene in which you have David in Melanie's stomach whilst digesting her other preys. So awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks! To be completely honest, I'm not sure where what is going to happen either! My stories mostly just write themselves so I am just as on the edge as you are! :D

--HK

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