[Report This]Date: December 06 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 09 - Shopping
!!!!!!HOLY SHIT!!!!!!
I just found this story two days ago and I’m almost speechless. This is easily my favorite story right now! It’s so fucking good on so many levels. The writing is polished and flows effortlessly between paragraphs and scenes. Melanie is a dream and fits the role of a benevolent – yet malevolent – giantess. The tiny accomplice scenario is rapidly becoming my favorite and this story encapsulates everything I like about that scenario. She’s so gentle with David, but at the same time, she teases him by placing him in her mouth and proceeds to toy with him with her tongue.
Oh, and the willing victims! Those scenes where the victims wanted to be eaten by Melanie…holy crap! I loved it. Loved it all. I’m terribly late to the party, and I see this story has gone through multiple revisions – it really shows. As I said, it’s polished and a good read. I want to give everyone who cooperated on this story a high five. I simply can’t give enough praise for this story. Sweet Jesus, I hope to see more of it. Thank you, thank you for taking the time to write this story. It’s so damn good.
Author's Response:
Wow, your words stun me! Thank you so much for your review! You are correct, this is revision 6, the final 'hurrah!' A lot of work has been put in this story over the last 8 years and I am glad that you are enjoying it! You have given me some more oomph to get these things out, so, without further ado, I give you the next chapter! ^^
Tell your friends, I don't mind an extra read or two, or even another review! I want to hear what everyone has to say and your review hit is spot on the nail. Thanks for letting me know what you liked the best, I sincerely appreciate it!
--HK