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Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 45: All Apologies

Nice foreshadowing in a dream and yes, Jessica can be terrifying when she's mad.

I love their little romantic exchanges, it's so sweet!



Author's Response:

Well anyone who is 120 feet tall is someone that you don't want to get on their bad side.

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Date: August 01 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Oh dear....Jessica seems pissed.



Author's Response:

Let's just see what she does next.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Oh man, Tucker darn goofed! If I were him Id stay away from Jess' s breasts at all times. Its too risky, her nipples are an accident waiting to happen!



Author's Response:

Maybe but they're kinda hard to miss.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

That part with Tucker nagging her to join was cute, great chapter!



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He convinced a giantess, go figures.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 43: To convince a giantess

Sweet, Jessica is in. I think you shouldn't use the word infamous to describe Jessica, famous would be a better choice since the former means she is well known for doing something terrible. 



Author's Response:

Dually noted. Thank you my friend.

Reviewer: jajefan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Amazing story! A great page turner.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I'm glad that you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 42: Heather

Oh this will be fun. Jessica will be in for one hell of a surprise, this is no less exciting than the Rammun saga! I also hope Jessica gets Tucker to stay, he's a different person entirely compared to his depressed self on Earth. 



Author's Response:

I thought this chapter would be boring in comparison to the others but I'm still glad that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 41: Arrival On Planet Paradise

Awesome chapter! I love how much of a tease Jess is being, he was taught the arts of sexy teasing well! Oh and that blurb about Dawn was awesome, I'm glad your tying in that arc because so far that one was my favorite!



Author's Response:

Yeah I wanted to show that Tucker has some lingering memories of his daughter who risked the stability of the entire universe just to spend down with her dad.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 41: Arrival On Planet Paradise

Awww....what a sweet couple. Jessica has very sensitive nipples if touching them can make her cry out in pain. I remember that one from the original. I wouldn't want to come between them, they deserve each other. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was one weakness I did give her but she does have a few others. Hopefully Jessica and Tucker can remain together.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 40: First Date

I like how playful Jess is being about the whole thing...Playfulness and sexyness go hand in hand I like to say! But I also liked that tidbit about Jess's slow aging, really lends some credibility to her character, I still wonder how she hasnt gone insane already from living so long!



Author's Response:

She's a strong person and she tries to put the majority of her fears to the back of her mind. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 40: First Date

Okay I am still awake and I like where this is goinG. I guess DD's do have some drawbacks. Romance is always nice.



Author's Response:

They certainly do.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 39: Come Together

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 39: Come Together

 BFG and SLG, such a sweet pairing and one made for each other. 

  Finally, the two of the admit their true feelings for each other. It feels right and I can't wait for the next arc. It'll be fun to read. 



Author's Response:

Thanks and I hope that I don't disappoint you.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Well done Jessica and welcome back, we missed you.



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She's glad to be back.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 38: Final showdown

Really good ending to the arc! I really liked all the little tidbits of backstory on Jess we got since Carpenter entered her mind. And Rammun's end was perfect!



Author's Response:

Thank you I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I almost thought that you had stopped reading since I didn't see much feedback from you recently.

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Date: July 05 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 37: Trip Down Memory Lane

Wow, lots of heartbreak here. A cheating husband, having to kill a friend and losong her BFF. Its a wonder how she managed to even keep it together.



Author's Response:

She's a strong girl and who knows maybe she was able to patch things up with her BFF

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

 I think Jessica won't mind what Tucker did to her, it's for the greater good she'll forgive him for it. Now to remove Rammun from her before her powers return. 

Reviewer: Hank the Boggle Champion Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Great story, loved reading it. I hope everything works out in the romance between Jess and Tucker. I just have a feeling that Tucker will be allowed to stay on Home, and if he was not that would be slightly depressing considering his daughters lonely existence. How many more chapters are you going to post? And I wanted to ask what football team do you root for in the BPL? I'm a ManU fan, and was sad to see England go down. Luckily Dempsey and the lads made it through.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Not sure exactly how many chapters are left. There are two arcs left followed by a fantasy spin off and then after that a short story series about Jessica and one about Dawn. Football wisw I'm a Wolves fan

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Date: June 25 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

That little group should hopefully be able to defeat Jessica, hope they can explain it away after Rammun is gone. 

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Date: June 22 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 34: Plan Of Action

Luis Suarez?

I hope their plan works, this will be one hell of a fight.



Author's Response:

We'll have to wit and see if their plan works. It's risky but what other choice do they have?

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