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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 46: Peggy

Great update! I really liked the details such as Jess forgetting her case cuz shes a bit of a dope, Jess having to use a lake as a mirror and introding us to her fan! Its details like thosr that help bring this story to life!



Author's Response:

The whole forgetting her case thing was actually because I realised that she never picked it up to begin with. That was a mistake on my part that I had to correct. Thanks for reading and I hope that you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 46: Peggy

This will be good. Nice little nod to Bully with " her pictures were popular with boys experiencing puberty."

 



Author's Response:

Thanks a little nod here and there never hurt no one.

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