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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 41: Arrival On Planet Paradise

Awesome chapter! I love how much of a tease Jess is being, he was taught the arts of sexy teasing well! Oh and that blurb about Dawn was awesome, I'm glad your tying in that arc because so far that one was my favorite!



Author's Response:

Yeah I wanted to show that Tucker has some lingering memories of his daughter who risked the stability of the entire universe just to spend down with her dad.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 41: Arrival On Planet Paradise

Awww....what a sweet couple. Jessica has very sensitive nipples if touching them can make her cry out in pain. I remember that one from the original. I wouldn't want to come between them, they deserve each other. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was one weakness I did give her but she does have a few others. Hopefully Jessica and Tucker can remain together.

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