[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 24: Dawn's plan
I like this remake, more conflict and therefore more action, Dawn may be in the wrong here but I kind of like this new Dawn. Smart girl, using her powers to break out of the cell.
Jessica must have been one cold distant mother based on what Dawn says and feels about him but I suspect Jessica had no choice but to let Tucker be. He went back and that's it, company policy prevented her from returning until it was too late.
I would like to meet this Graham but if she continues this rampage, she will never meet him ever again as the universe destroys itself. Tucker will have to be the hero of Home. Speaking of Tucker, he seems to have discovered how fortunate the biggest heroine of all has decided to be his friend and how lucky he is.
By the way, is it possible if Jessica were to find out what is happening on Earth in Limbo? I think it might be better if she did know about it. It would help...this thing that we have.
Author's Response:
You can add that if you want in that little thing you're writing. As I said I'm giving you free reign. Maybe future Jessica isn't all that bad, as you can imagine it must have been difficult for her to raise Dawn all by herself. I'm not sure whether we will seethis Jessica, I might save it for a later short story. Thank you for continuing to read and I hope that you enjoy the rest.