[Report This]Date: May 14 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 23: Dire News
Looks like Dawn's busting out. Part of me thinks they should tell Tucker about his daughter and have him talk her into returning to the future. On the other hand, not knowing what will happen if they give him foreknowledge of such events, plus the risk of him getting killed by these events is a real issue. One thing is for certain though, they are running out of time. And trying to both subdue and convince Dawn to go back before she finds her dad where ever it is they're handing him is going to waste even more time.
Now if there was just some way for Jessica to prevent Tucker's death.
Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to read the story. We'll just have to wait and see how things fair out.
[Report This]Date: May 14 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 23: Dire News
Uh oh, Dawn's going to break Jessica out and this could get ugly.
So,Dawn is really just a lonely girl. She got bullied because of her size and found solace in only one person at school and she hates her mother for giving her that size and for keeping her from her father.
Her unstoppable growth is really disturbing, she could really cause the end of Home if she continues to grow. I don't think she'll grow to the size of a star but she could die the size of a continent. Maybe if they can find a way to stop her from growing she'll agree to back.
I have a feeling it is all up to Tucker, only he can convince her to go back and save the world. He will be a hero but just not in the way Dawn said it.
Author's Response:
She won't be breaking Jessica, don't forget she's in limbo. For Dawn they may find a way to stop her from growing, but for now she's growing like a weed. Maybe Tucker will convince her to go back, or maybe Dawn will decide to do it herself