[Report This]Date: December 11 2018 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
What a wonderful story. Blazed through it at an unhealthy rate. Solid characters and some interesting plot points. Felt more like a series than a single story but fantastic nonetheless.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I've always loved this story, I can read it again and again. It never gets old! I've read all your stories but this one will always be my favorite. There was a time when a little red bird was by the title, did you know what that meant??
Author's Response:
Sorry I have no idea what the bird is.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2017 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Just came across this story and I must say I enjoyed the whole thing! It was an excellent read that had me glued to the screen the whole time. There were only a handful of issues that I came across where a few things were repeated a bit often but that might just be the side effect of reading it all in one go. 10/10 thanks for the great read.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Check out some of the other BFG stories.
Date: October 23 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Wow! Just wow! What a great ending to one of the best stories on this site. Even though I was pretty sure he was staying u still managed to keep me on my toes till the very end. I also like how tasmin was subdued but not killed. Could leave room for another story.
Overall great job and I can't wait to read your next masterpiece if there is one.
Author's Response:
Thanks, there is more to come including a fantasy spin off and prequel/sequel stories. Great that you read it and hopefully you will stick around for the future.
Date: October 23 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Damn that's a beautiful ending.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: September 15 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Heehee....Tucker's Miracle SemenTM...it could be a best seller!
Author's Response:
Yeah buy now and get free pen. At participating stores only, while stocks last, terms and conditions apply.
Date: September 09 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Glad Jessica didn't blame Tucker for any of this and despite the pain, she is now stronger and even more beautiful than she was.
Author's Response:
Yeah she knew that it wasn't his intention. Hopefully she can learn to live with her new size and strength.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Glad to see Jessica and Tucker took her defeat well and now that he finally bedded her, we can see how they react to that in the next one!
Author's Response:
We'll just have to wait and see my friend.
Date: August 22 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I'd like to point out that I never mentioned Jessica winning the paegent, just that her pictures from it were very popular.
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing that out mate. Glad that you're still enjoying the story.
Date: August 22 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
In one of the BFG side stories, didn't she win that pangeant? I realize that with Dawn messing with the time line, information from those stories is unrealiable. My concern about it, is that if things aren't happening as they did in THAT timeline, then there's a chance that Tucker's bad future happens. Crossing my fingers.
Author's Response:
Yeah it was never stated that she actually won the pageant, just competed in it. I thought having her win the entire thing was too obvious and wanted to make things a little different.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Tamsin seems like someone who showed up in the original BFG story. Seems Jessica has a lot of enemies although not all of them are of her own doing.
Author's Response:
Yeah I changed her a little but she's basically the same woman.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Oh dear....Jessica seems pissed.
Author's Response:
Let's just see what she does next.
Date: August 01 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Oh man, Tucker darn goofed! If I were him Id stay away from Jess' s breasts at all times. Its too risky, her nipples are an accident waiting to happen!
Author's Response:
Maybe but they're kinda hard to miss.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
That part with Tucker nagging her to join was cute, great chapter!
Author's Response:
He convinced a giantess, go figures.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Amazing story! A great page turner.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Well done Jessica and welcome back, we missed you.
Author's Response:
She's glad to be back.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I think Jessica won't mind what Tucker did to her, it's for the greater good she'll forgive him for it. Now to remove Rammun from her before her powers return.
Date: June 30 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Great story, loved reading it. I hope everything works out in the romance between Jess and Tucker. I just have a feeling that Tucker will be allowed to stay on Home, and if he was not that would be slightly depressing considering his daughters lonely existence. How many more chapters are you going to post? And I wanted to ask what football team do you root for in the BPL? I'm a ManU fan, and was sad to see England go down. Luckily Dempsey and the lads made it through.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Not sure exactly how many chapters are left. There are two arcs left followed by a fantasy spin off and then after that a short story series about Jessica and one about Dawn. Football wisw I'm a Wolves fan
[Report This]Date: June 25 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
That little group should hopefully be able to defeat Jessica, hope they can explain it away after Rammun is gone.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Jessica is still in there, don't give up! Rammun must not win. So it looks like Dawn is right, Tucker will be a hero but not in the way she said.
Author's Response:
Maybe he will, we'll just have to wait and see