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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2014 10:11 AM Title: Piping

cool story, Iliked the ending but I didnt get the last line "It'd be much, much, worse." who siad that? you? kinzie? iget what it implies i guess but i think it could have been written out better.

 

besides that one little line I enjoyed the story but Iwonder why he didnt just pay the money back?

Reviewer: Nsolo6672 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2014 8:18 PM Title: Piping

I like this story. It's different, but I'm just not sure exactly what's going on. I feel like its incomplete.

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