[Report This]Date: June 26 2014 10:23 AM Title: The Games Begin
Apologize for the late review. RL has been stressful, plus I was involved in that little squabble in the chatbox.
As for the story. I'd have to say the use of a boardgame is a nice touch. Ashley now must fight, or rather play for her own survival.
It'll be fun to see how this works out.
Also, I'm super excited for Emma's interactions with Ashley. Nothing would be more destructive to Ashley's already crushed spirit than to be used by Emma, her former best friend.
Brutal and Beautiful as usual Doll, I'll see you next chapter.
Author's Response:
Heyas, Sorry i didn't respond to this sooner, my stupid Outlook didn't give the notice email...
I didn't realise there had been a squabble in the chat box, i think i've only used that thing like... 3 times? Too many ego's and contradictory characters knocking about half the time for my taste. I just like having fun writing hehe =P Hope your RL has calmed down for you though ^_^
You've got the "play to live" thing right, after-all, what good is a shrinker that doesn't keep you entertained, too much hassle! Emma will get her turn, the others just need to get her a little more used to the idea that it's essentially what Ashley is for now ;)
Thanks for reading ^_^ Next chapter is up soon! (Been really wrestling over what chapter to do next, Goldilocks, or this, but i think i've chosen this for the next update! )
Date: June 19 2014 5:28 PM Title: The Games Begin
This is like brutal mario party, I dont know how else to describe it. I wonder if there will be brutal mini games?
Author's Response:
lol, i like the idea of it being a brutal mario party :P Leanne and Chrissy definately have some games in mind for Ash, not sure you could call it 'fun for all the family' however hehe Hope you enjoy ^_^
[Report This]Date: June 19 2014 6:57 AM Title: The Games Begin
i like this alot. very fun stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for taking the time to leave an all-too-rare rating/comment, its people like you that keep the site alive :)
Also, pleased you are enjoying this as its been fun to write, plenty more to come for poor lil' Ashley hehe ^_^
[Report This]Date: June 17 2014 7:52 PM Title: The Games Begin
That breast scene was awesome, I don't think I have ever scene it explained that way, the pure torment that would actually be felt if someone were really subjected to that. Fantastic job!
Love the overall helplessness you have conveyed of Ash, to be regulated to a game piece, she's completey at their mercy. Can't wait to see what fun they have with her next!
Author's Response:
I do like bringing new light to previously poorly-thought-out situations lol :P Benefit of being female and writing about females i guess, we know how much we 'move' lol!
Seems like i'm only writing this for about 3 or 4 people now, no-one else seems to enjoy it, but i guess they can go fuk themselves, i enjoy writing for my friends anyway ;)