Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 8:48 PM Title: Friend or Foe

That was not boring! Excellent descriptions as usual, you always make the reader feel like he is in the tinies place. Love how easily over powered she was by her friends toe and how you described the breast flesh constantly smothering her as it thwarts her efforts to get air. 

 

Was checking back here ever day for this, so glad to have a new chapter to read, thank you!

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 7:16 AM Title: Friend or Foe

I'm liking this. I admit I didn't have time to do much more than skim and will probably need to come back and reread it, but the foot action was fun and I enjoyed the darkly humorous interactions of the girls as they rapidly began to see their former friend as a toy. I'm surprised you say you thought the chapter was boring, as there was still quite a lot going on even though it was mostly just conversation. I'll definitely be checking back in.

Author's Response:

Heyas, thanks for commenting ^_^  I was more-so bored of the time it took me to get the chapter finished really, i got about 3 pages of it out in one night, then the last page of it was a painful hack through the final parts before i finally reached a natural stopping point for the chapter... i think i was more-so bored of the slight writers block i was going through rather than the story, i just didn't see that at the time.

Hope you do get a chance to give it a proper read (hope you like it too lol!)  :)