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Reviewer: Skulldeath50 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2018 6:13 PM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.

Please finish it, I’d love to see more scat.

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2014 9:35 PM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.

This story has been awesome so far. I love the description and this story is unlike something I have read, I am loving the wy it's turning out and I hope it continues.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 10:00 AM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.

Hope to see more of your stories soon. 



Author's Response:

Unfortunately I am taking a permanent haitus from writing. My life at the moment is so hectic that I can't find the feeling to write. I even had to give up on my collabaration with Gadget91 on the story we were doing together because I couldn't write. It sucks 'cause I enjoyed writing ut I afraid I won't be doing anymore anytime soon. Still enjoy reading though =)

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 12:42 AM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.

Fun read, I look forward to future chapters.  :]

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 6:09 PM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.

Great chapter. I loved how you brought the older sister connection in



Author's Response:

Thank you. I often like bringing in connections to give the chapter more meaning. If it was just a random chick it would be nice. But the fact that it was her loving older sister makes it ten times better.

Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 9:22 AM Title: Gulp, Burritos and family.

WOW, I really love your stories, I readed the shrink ray adventures wich was very very good, and this one, amazing! Your writing style is really good, onjoyable and simple to adapt to, what happens is also very interesting. Hope you'll continue for long with this one with dofferent sorts of material aside from Lora's stomach, like feet ect. Anyway you do what you want, just continue!



Author's Response:

Thank you. It is always nice to know that people like my writing. This story is actually only going to go on for another two chapters or so. I'm trying to write shorter and shorter stories rather than the long ones I usually write. But thank you again for your kind words. They mean a lot.

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