[Report This]Date: July 16 2021 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
Ok, so I favorited this quite some time ago, but only now got around to reading it.
And......damn, like I am kicking myself for not reading it sooner.
This reality you crafted really is something else.
I had similar ideas awhile back, and have seen some similar ideas in one Giantess/size comic with tiny robots with people's memories being uploaded into them as sort of robot tiny clones.
And the idea of being able to sell or license out yourself like this would definitely lead to scenarios like the one you wrote here, with a girl choosing to crate little copies of herself to toy with and vent her own insecurities with, to feel powerful.
The nature of Jennifer being explored here with her tiny self, and her treatment of her was great, dark in some places, and revealing in others.
And that ending!!! That ending!!! The cycle repeating itself.
I love this, and it yet another gem you have added her to GTSworld, and to the size writing community, and I thank you for it.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
This is interesting. I've only ever read one other giantess story where the tiny was the same person as the giantess.
Overall, great read. I hope you'll forgive me for not going into detail, I seem to have run out of ways to praise your work. ;D.
Author's Response:
I suppose you can be forgiven this once. Thanks very much for the review.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
God this was such an engrossing, horrifying read. While this little Jennifer's fate was what it was, I honestly let out a sigh of relief when the tack didn't go through her.That was just...cripes.
And of course, I can't help but be amused that I actually snickered a bit at the ending. It's amazing how that works, really, knowing that that Jennifer is just as torturous and sadistic as...well, Jennifer. Knowing that she would be doing the same things that are going to be done to her.
Long story short, despite not being my own wheelhouse, this was yet another interesting read and I'm glad I gave it my time. The concept was an inspired one, and you carried it out with aplomb.
On MT6, that's happening a bit sooner than expected! And I even have a pre-emptive pit in my stomach over it because I get the feeling I'm gonna really hate Ella going off comments you've made about her presence! I'm also going to quietly hope that the mentioned book club member is Carolyn. For Scott's sake.
Also ecstatic to see that more Freshman is coming, and am curious to see whether or not we'll be picking up with more nice family time or heading back to school.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing man. I appreciate you venturing outside the wheelhouse once again.
I've made myself sit down and think through potential MT stories and with what I've come up with, Ella is going to have a big focus in the 7th one (wow, it's sickening to type out that I've almost done that many). And Carolyn is not the one who's going to appear. Teehee.
I'd answer about Freshman, but it'll be here soon enough for you to just see for yourself.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
Re the story going to be longer: I'm not sure if it's how the story is written, but it seems it's only me, so nvm; the most rational explanation I can find is the thought of all the many things she wanted to try - but after reading the last chapter... oh well, I guess the fast ending adds to the feeling of helplessness :)
About Mommy's Timeout 6, I think I told you already that Judy is the best of all, and since #1 I can't help thinking what his future is going to be like with his girlfriend. And Susan's (from mt2) and the other women's reaction when they find out he's been drinking even more... but who cares? You said you're working on it and I thought it wouldn't happend before a few months at least - nothing else matters.
(btw, since I discovered that giantess stories can be long and actually have a plot, my todo list has been growing to 60 or so. The Freshman is one of those stories, so no idea about it)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review man. I see what you mean with the length; it probably could've gone on, but I wanted to keep things as simple and focused on the main concept as possible. Susan won't be showing up in the 6th entry though someone else from that 2nd story will. Hope you like the Freshman once you get around to it eventually.
Date: April 01 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
I want to make love to this story.
Author's Response:
Physically, that would probably be challenging, though I am glad you enjoyed the end.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2014 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
Very unique and interesting approach, this. I also like the shorter format (even though I enjoy your longer stories as well). A very good story, all-in-all.
The ending was a little bit sudden for me, though. I felt that the vore scene and it's aftermath could have been perhaps half a page longer or so.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, man. I agree with you that I might've made the ending a bit longer; I just didn't want a lengthier vore scene to overshadow the identity crisis theme.
Date: April 01 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
Hasn't anyone ever told Jennifer, "You are what you eat"?
Brain cells die and are replaced with new ones grown from proteins, neurons and synapses are renewed and reconnected, and the genetic memory is updated for the next replication...
Author's Response:
I probably would've used that line if I thought of it while writing this chapter. Ah well.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2014 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 5: One Little Choice
Mommy's timeout 6, eh. Would love to see all the kids shrunken at her big beautiful feet especially her daughter(sorry just forgot their names).
aaron
Author's Response:
How dare you not take the time to memorize the names of each and every one of my fictional fetish characters!
Thanks for reviewing man.