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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Phase 2

Oh wow, this is going to be an instant favorite, I love the stories where the shrinkee is very durable, makes scenes like where she was stepping on her so much more fun *weg*

Fantasitc writing style as always, great character development, good descriptions. 

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: Phase 2

I'm not a big fan of brutality stories, but this is a hell of a well done version of that genre.  You do a great job of selecting which detail to focus on to really connect the reader to little Jennifer's experience.

I would love to see some conversations between the two Jennifers in between torture scenes.  



Author's Response:

I appreciate the review.  And when it comes to conversations, the remaining chapters actually do just that.

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