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Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 5:35 PM Title: How the society came to be.

That's kind of depressing being a reader of (English) Rétrécissement.  It makes me believe now that there isn't any hope for the guy at all.  That even the people closest to him will probably turn on him, since they would have been influenced by society to treat him that way.  Clarifying how the law and Shrinker organizations treat shrinkers and normals defeats many of the comments and suggestions I've made.  Its becoming clear where you intend to take that story.  Stuck in that house, the property (slave) of his stepsister, just barely surviving til his eventual shrinkage out of existence.  I'll continue to read as long as the quality of the writing is good.



Author's Response:

Well, I don't know for sure which direction Italykeke will take the story. He comes up with the storyline and I just rewrite it to sound better. Also you shouldn't believe that just because someone is influenced by society that they will conform to the norm. The teacher Vivian is a good example. She refuses to believe what everyone says about shrinkers and his sister, Megan, still cares for him. However, you are correct to say that he has overwhelming odds against him but you shouldn't conclude that he is therefore doomed to fail.

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