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Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter Six :Option B

Great story, loving it so far but would like to see some more action so Option B for me



Author's Response:

Don't worry the last few chapters have more action in them.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter Six :Option B

A

Author's Response:

four more chapters left....time for the fun to begin

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter Six :Option B

Option C.

Her sister calls her and tells Sarah that she is coming over.

Author's Response:

I would like to incorporate a little three way character interaction,the whole two person dynamic is easier but not as much fun.

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter Six :Option B

Option C. And some foot action would be very nice

Author's Response:

Yeah I know it's been teased and I promise to deliver upon that.

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter Six :Option B

Option C...Maybe a little unaware with sister? Just an idea.



Author's Response:

Yeah that's a definite possibility.I don't know how I could incorporate it with the plot i've laid out ,although.....accidents happen.

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