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Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Option A:  He wakes up in her bra like an insect stuck to a windshield.

 

Don't make him too fragile or else it will limit your future options.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I definately like the bra hammock idea and she should go with it regardless.   But my preference is Option C, time to talk to sister.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I say B,  I don't think she'd give in to her desires when her fiance could be at Death's Door.  So have him wake up before she does anything.

Reviewer: goku321 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Option b

Reviewer: TreeBurk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well I for one like butt play because I find it the sexiest part of a woman.I don't know if i'd really enjoy being shoved up a woman's ass if I was really small but I certainly find reading about it exciting.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Option C.

Hmm. Most people in these reviews like ass a lot. What are some actions you guys like to see a giantess do to a tiny with her ass besides just sitting on them? (any specifics?)

Reviewer: TreeBurk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

option C,im all about some ass play brother.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Option c two inches.. By too big and not too small! It's perfect! Also I vote some butt action included in this story... A little booty is always nice!! Lol or big booty which ever you prefer lol

Reviewer: goku321 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Option c two inches

Reviewer: Bobhighcap Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dude!!!!! Ive been planning to do a thing just like this!!! :D

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Option D!

She gets out of the shower and notices him loafing around. She finds the formula and decides to make him a drink with it to see what happens. He takes it and drinks it up quickly.

Once he shrinks he finds out that there are more terrible things than just her feet. He'll have to be worried about being swallowed alive, shoved up her butt, or crushed! How will she want to play though?

Left all the big creativity to you and maybe left room for future chapters if you like any of those options.

Author's Response:

I like the options Lupe,i'll see how Ican incorporate some of these ideas next chapter.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks. I appreciate the compliments. I am currently a little busy at the moment so I cannot write chapters to my stories consistently.

Also, I am not exactly the best story writer becuase I go straight to the point, to the action. One criticism that I receive is my lack of detail which I am steadily improving as I write.

Therefore, many writers here appreciate my suggestions becuase of my concise and inspirational ideas.

Anyway, I think interactive stories are great becuase it lets the readers take whats already on the plate and decides what is next.

I would like to thank ChaosDuck for this story and his generosity to write it based off of suggestions.

Reviewer: goku321 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I go with @TomSpeedy with option d

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

@TomSpeedy I think you should be a writer on this site!! I've seen where you've done other reviews and you should write some stories of your own!! I'd read them!!!! .... As long as there was some booty action in it lol.... But to a review for this story so far so good.. I don't want to vote this time I just want to be surprised!! But I would however like to see our character shrink and keep Sarah the same sized!!

Reviewer: TheSilentOne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just as a suggestion: Having just the option may get rather confusing down the line.  I'd recommend if not chapter names at least something like Chapter 2: Option B



Author's Response:

Duly noted

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Option D. lol.

Sarah is tired and wants to have fun with Jimmy. She brings home her own special formula, one that makes someone shrink. She looks at (Jimmy's special sauce) and empties its contents into the sink. She then fills the bottle of (Jimmy's special sauce) with the shrinking formula.

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'll vote for A. A good soda is hard to resist! I agree and hope that Jimmy shrinks somehow. :)

Reviewer: TheSilentOne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just looked at the Size Roles and Growth tags, and it does seem predetermined that Sarah will grow.  Is this up for change or debate depending on how we vote?



Author's Response:

Updated the tags and summary to add more options for the reader,thanks for pointing this oversight to me.The point of this story is for you the reader to give the story it's direction,an idea I haven't seen on here before.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I vote B as well! I hope that jimmy shrinks and I don't want Sarah to grow. So far it's a really good start and it's different!!! Awesome keep it up!!

Reviewer: TheSilentOne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

As much as A might fit this site better, I'm going to go with a more likely choice here.  It seems like she'd be more likely to grab the OJ than a small soda pop can.

Therefore, my vote is for B

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