[Report This]Date: October 21 2021 3:00 PM Title: Finale
I'm gonna be honest, this story was pretty heart-wrenching and a tad hard to read, right up until the Meet Stewart chapter.
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Finding out that the morality system of shrinking was not actually set in stone and was just a widely-accepted theory was not only interesting world-building, but knowing that Rob just got unlucky and was not a victim of an unfair system was weirdly reassuring to me. And while even though you mentioned that Jaz was not everyone's favorite, she was definitely mine, and I was so glad with how the story ended.
Above all, I'm glad that you worked through your dark period and finished this story. Even if you might not be completely satisfied with it, I certainly enjoy it nonetheless. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: November 10 2019 11:27 PM Title: Finale
This was AWESOME
Idk why, but I ever knew that the choosen one was Jaz, not a suprise to me tbh.
Well, the only suprise was the 2 of them dating, well, a lovely detail after all.
Hope to see more works with this gentle air or... I'm kinda searching a story like this where the mc is more like... ultra depressed, i thought about all the situation, and in some point, I think even if I like it for all the kink stuff, I would go some depressed...
After all, great history man! :D
Date: June 27 2014 7:36 PM Title: Finale
I always kinda knew it would be Jaz. Because she always seemed like the "best person for the job" (read: only person for the job). I never really swung any which way. I still kind of wish we got to learn why Rob's shrunk, and whether or not he could change back.
Oh well, glad this roller coaster of whatever is over. Good luck on your next series.
Date: June 27 2014 4:25 PM Title: Finale
You are good with these stories. I am hoping for other excellent story to see. I will miss one this tough.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 1:10 PM Title: Finale
Great first story, I loved it.
Though surely you'll make an alternate ending where he ended with Kristen...right? ;-;
Author's Response:
ACTUALLY I am considering doing alternate endings. If I do that won't be for a while though. So for now this is whatcha got
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 1:02 PM Title: Finale
Excellent surprise ending! :-D
Thanks for sharing this.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 12:25 PM Title: Finale
I'm glad he ended up with Jaz. Of all his interactions, hers was the most fun.
Author's Response:
Yeah I had a lot of fun with her.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 11:06 AM Title: Finale
A pleasant end to a story that kept us guessing who the "Best Friend" was. I'm pleasantly surprised that it turned out as well as it did and that their relationship isn't as master and pet, but as lovers. I think you did a pretty good job for your first gentle story and you only got better as the story progressed. Maybe you'll write about Alicia from England to show what she wanted to do with a micro person (not advocating for a mean giantess. Maybe she was a nice person after all).