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Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 9:39 AM Title: Game, Set, Match

Kristen's a huge tease, using her power over him to not play fair and win. I love her already.



Author's Response:

Ha. She is pretty great. Glad you like her

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 8:28 AM Title: Game, Set, Match

You shouldn't have called her "five," dude. Women are way more willing to embrace their inner child than men. And, that's a fact, Jack!

Author's Response:

He just never learns does he? *Shakes head*

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 3:47 AM Title: Game, Set, Match

Only 5 or 6 more chapters? That's no fun. These characters are amazingly well writen and it seems way to soon to say good bye to them. As for being mean about keeping the title character a secret and keeping us guessing, I don't think it's mean at all. It's one of the big hooks of the story. It's fun to be kept guessing. Especialy when the characters feel so real and the world they inhabit is so expertly crafted for the reader. I should add that you are doing an awesome job at keeping the fear alive. The fear of what will happen when rob receives his placement and is taken away from his best friends. Should he end up with a stranger, I can't imagine anyone taking as good a care of him as his friends do. Primarily because all they would see is his size and figure he must be an aweful human being.

Can't wait for the next chapter! (Even if it does bring us closer to the end)



Author's Response:

There's always the possibility they can come up again later ^^ 

But as far as Rob goes, at least in this portion of his life, it's nearing the end. Though if I'm being honest five chapters is probably not happening haha. At a minimum six. Probably more.

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