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Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2014 1:39 PM Title: Early Morning Hi-jinks

New reader review, I like your story set up so far.
Jaz is either the best thing in the world to happen to him, or a total asshole. I'm not convinced she's a 100% in either direction. That she can hear him in her ear is a plus, but he really needs a safe word/gesture he can signal when things get too crazy. Seriously, he jumped off the spoon in panic, or accidentally sucked in with a breath.
Right now, if I were Rob, I would quickly text my friends the situation, than try calling house phone, her cell, the other friends while moving to an object for shelter or at least out of foot rest territory. But I have a feeling that's not the story this is going to be next chapter.

Author's Response:

She's nothing if not unique. 

 

As for the speculation...Well I won't spoil it but I did put some consideration into a lot of those things you mentioned ^^

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2014 10:52 AM Title: Early Morning Hi-jinks

"Did Mom know I was there?"

I will guess...not!

:-O

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