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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 9:39 AM Title: After Work

Nice wrestling match, WWA or whatever that fake wrestling is can touch what Jimmy went through.

Can't wait for the next chapter as Jimmy keep dwindling in size. Anyways I think in the next chapter, that Jimmy is so worn out from his fight, his body has to work harder which shrinks him like 5 inches and pounds. Just a suggestion, if not keep doing what your doing.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 9:39 AM Title: After Work

Nice wrestling match, WWA or whatever that fake wrestling is can touch what Jimmy went through.

Can't wait for the next chapter as Jimmy keep dwindling in size. Anyways I think in the next chapter, that Jimmy is so worn out from his fight, his body has to work harder which shrinks him like 5 inches and pounds. Just a suggestion, if not keep doing what your doing.

Author's Response:

I think I prefer his shrinking being constant each day in this story, making it feel like a slow, steady march of inevitability.  It's an interesting concept though, and maybe something like that might find its way into a future story of mine sometime.  Thanks.

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