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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2014 9:31 PM Title: Some Ground Rules

Great story, do you want to know why?
I'm constantly checking for a update. And having my mind fill with questions on what's going to happen next.

That's why :)

Author's Response:

Haha, thanks.  I'll try to start posting a little quicker than once a week for now, but we'll see how much time I have.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 11 2014 10:07 PM Title: Some Ground Rules

Slowly dwindling in size, pride, ego, and soul.

Nice chapter, just describing how James or Jimmy is feeling throughout this shrinking process.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :).

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2014 6:28 AM Title: Some Ground Rules

Oh, don't get me wrong, role-reversal interplays are still great, and I'm sure you've done some cool stuff with it in the rest of the story.  The difference is plain in their relationship in this new chapter, and I'm liking how it's shaking up the dynamics of their interactions even more.  Really the only reason I said that on the last chapter was because there's far more mother-son stories than father-daughter on the site.  Looking forward to seeing what else you've done.



Author's Response:

Yeah, hopefully the father-daughter nature of their relationship will remain very apparent even as the appearance of "mothering" grows.  I think it does, but let me know if you agree.

Btw, not sure if you were the one responsible for getting this story on the front page (featured stories), but if you were, then I appreciate it :).  It was a big surprise when I noticed it there the other day.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2014 10:49 PM Title: Some Ground Rules

Well, I had to continue reading. I don't know why.

Again, the writing is excellent, and might be one of the few things that keeps drawing me back to the story. I do have two problems with the story, and they're problems that I've had for a long while.

One, why does James have so little control over his penis? He's got to be minimum 40-45 years old and I've had better before I turned 11. I don't care how the condition's affecting him down there; his self-control is borderline inept.

Two is the big one. There's a general lack of a certain sympathetic feeling. It's "concern". Literally NO ONE is concerned about James' condition. No doctor (whom he could really sue for malprractoce and negligence), Kyra, Jame's coworkers, or even James himself. It's an element that makes everyone seem more cruel than they really should, qnd I don't like it.

And again, no numerical rating. It's too good for anything except 5 stars, butbi really don't like it. It's like reading the giantessworld equivalent of Neon Genesis Evangelion.



Author's Response:

"One, why does James have so little control over his penis?" --> I suppose it's possible that the shrinking has affected his hormone balance or something.  But I prefer to think of it just being because Kyra is so much bigger and more overwhelming (physically and sexually) for him as he shrinks.

"Literally NO ONE is concerned about James' condition." --> Yeah, maybe this makes it less realistic, but I really do enjoy the story this way personally.  Especially as he shrinks, having people care about his rights and feelings less and less.

I started watching Neon Genesis once, but didn't get more than a few episodes in.  I guess anime isn't really my thing, lol.

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