Date: April 08 2014 8:24 AM Title: Perverted Deeds ...
Great chapter! Wish it were updated more often.
"The dad is the only source of income in the household. He is, and continues to be, the legal and functional head of household. He literally just has to tell Kyra that if she keeps forcing him to forsake work time for her own desires that he will get fired, or tell her that if she keeps spending all of his money, they'd get into monumental debt. Both ways results in a loss of money. If she's not an idiot, she'd stop. Roll credits."
I noticed that as well and it bothered me too. I feel like this needs to be addressed before chapter 10 because this is a big plot hole indeed.
Also, how small is he going to get? It says Dwarf: 3-5ft but I'd like to see him become handheld or fit in the palm of her hand(I don't like micro so I hope he wouldn't get that small lol).
Author's Response:
See response below. Not sure I'll make the chapter 10 deadline or not ... Also, I don't usually like characters that small (hand-sized, I mean) so I'm afraid you're out of luck here.
Anyways, thanks for reading :)
[Report This]Date: April 06 2014 10:33 PM Title: Perverted Deeds ...
How tall and big is Kyra? And how big is the size difference, just a little confused on that part. Besides that nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Looking through my notes ...
Kyra is 6'2" and around 155-160 lbs, pretty skinny for that height (BMI of around 20).
I give James's height at the start of each day in the story, i.e. Wednesday: 5'2". Usually it's the top of each chapter. But he shrinks 2 inches per day and so now he's 5'2" and ~110 lbs (I have him starting at 6'6" and 220 lbs, with his weight decreasing proportional to his height cubed, if you're wondering). Horray for math!
If you're looking for more physical comparisons between their respective heights, I can try to put more in as we go. i.e. right now at 5'2" to her 6'2" his head probably just reaches her shoulders or thereabouts.