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Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

'Slack-jawed amazement', and - I'll bet that she would have smiled at something else, that he would have had showing between his front pants pockets!  :P



Author's Response: That's assuming he would be wearing pants (rather than a breech clout). Lol!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

You sure know all these gun details well.



Author's Response: Trust me; they're more fascinating to read about than use. And, based on what I've read, I don't EVER want to use one!

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good thing those bullets didn’t hit her in the eye; a mosquito bite in the eye would hurt!



Author's Response: Good point. ;-)

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