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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

You are such a tease! Mallory tells Jill that "I think he wants to get into your panties" and I thought things were about to get real again!

Then Mallory talks about Bob massaging feet? I mean really? That was so random that I thought you wrote that just to bug me or something. haha.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

A lot of detail in Jill’s interaction with Bobby. Very nice.



Author's Response:

Thanks Spooky!  Means a lot coming from you!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 14

So, let me get this straight. He's going to become their foot-slave (among other things) while Mallory tries to sell him, on-line?

I hear a bidding war being declared...with Diane and Rosanne as the first two combatants.

Author's Response:

I don't think that the lady's would put Bobby, (Himself),.. up 'For Sale'.  No. Mallory, will just rent him out,... for say, $500.00 / Hr. ?

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bob keeps descending further and further into shrinking man hell.  It seems every bad thing possible is going to happen to him.  And now he's stuck with total strangers, so his chances of getting back to his wife are very low, unless he gets help.  Not likely considering how every woman he's encountered has treated him.  I hope things start turning around for him soon.  Keep going!



Author's Response:

Ha!  Yeah, He's getting passed around like a hot potato, but- he did have a pretty nice time with Diane?  At least, he didn't end up going on the road with Roseanne! I don't know if he'll ever get back to his wife, although he doe's still stand a slim, but small chance of reuniting with her...

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