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Reviewer: jbruce19 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2018 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

The waitress!

The way you described Roseane didnt sound that appealing in my opinion.

Also, i think the waitress, airline hostess, secretary, nurse relationship is always good. They have their job to do, and its great to see these types of women intereact with tinies. Then they break rules to have fun with the tiny which is always fun to read.

Or we can have the waitress go back to Diane. She could serve him to Diane.
Example:" Miss, would you like a foot massage?

"Yes please. My right foot is sore, and my toes would like some work", said Diane.

The watiress brings Bob, hidden inside her fist.
She bends down to Diane's feet and takes Diane's right high heel off.

She places Bob inside the high heel so his head is in the toe section. Bob's legs are in the arch area and Bob is looking up, the back of his head in the grooves of Diane's toe prints.

"Stay still, and relax" the waitress whispers to Bob winking at him. (Diane doesnt notice.)

The wiatress then lifts her head from under the table and gently inserts Diane's foot into the high heel shoe.

Diane feels a cushion but doesnt realize that it is Bob since he is still.

"Thank you, have a great day" the waitress waves goodbye to Diane. Diane just gave her a tip for the cushion.

Bob, suffers trying to breathe and begins to slightly move. Diane doesnt feel mich because she is walking.

Diane drives home still thinking that the cushion is just adjusting to the shape of her foot. The waitress told her it will move after a while.

Bob meanwhile was trying to move, his body trapped under the weight put on him, his voice muted by the foot on his face.

Diane finally reaches home and arrives in her bedroom. She sits down on her bed, and takes her feet out of her heels.

Then she hears it. It sounded like screaming.

Diane noticed it came from her shoe and looked down. She saw Bob yelling words of pain. She looked even closer to see any wounds. Just bruises, she was relieved.

She gently puts him on her palm.

"Bob, were you in my shoe this whole time?"

"Yes" was all he can say.

"How can I make it up to you"?

"Just keep me safe" Bob answered.

"I promise. Want to have my leftovers?" Diane asked like a caring mother.

"I would love to, thank you Diane."

--End chapter--.

Well, that was fun. I guess I got carried away again. Great chapter. I hope its the waitress next!

Author's Response:

Hm, I don't know Tom.  If Diane 'unawarely',  walked on tiny Bobby, (while trapped inside her shoe) 'Realistically', her weight would puverize him into a jelly-like paste that would ooze out from between her gigantic toes and dribble all over her shoe.  The weight convertion, would be something like 60 tons, compared to him.

Nice idea though...but, if she were 'unaware'?

Reviewer: Superdude9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm gonna have to agree with everyone else on this one. Even if you have already written the chapter, Bob should just get out of there and go with the hot waitress. Nothing wrong with Rosanne...just...I don't know. Waitresses are just so...great. Regardless, still an amazing story.

Author's Response:

No, I haven't already written it, I just couldn't quite see Bobby ending up going with Rosanne all the way to Tennessee.  So, I thought I'd take a poll and see what you guys thought about it...  but, then again, I'm still not quite sure about that yet either...

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

I vote for waitress.



Author's Response:

Well, thats' two votes for the waitress.  Rosanne's a big star, And, everyone want's the younger minimum wage waitress to capture him?  I know, there is something vary attractive about the innocents of youth, not to mention the younger, healthier, sexier body...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm first for once? Yay, me! :-D

Seriously though; that would depend. Is this the a la cart waitress who was wearing the sexy black tights when she so unwittingly (ALWAYS wanted to use that word!) scooped up Bob with the napkin? Or, is this the Asian-American hottie who told the former about Rosie wanting room service after her next-to-last set?

Personally, I'd opt for Column A...just so we can see what the first waitress looks like.

Author's Response:

It's the first one.  She must have changed into her skirt for the evening shift, it would be just slightly better suited for the afternoon crowd and as she has learned, she get's a lot more tip's when she's wearing a short skirt.  ;)

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