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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2014 9:18 AM Title: Ch. 10 'Star Struck'

Oh, man! This self-medicating beeyotch _really_ over-reacted, didn't she? If I were Bob, I would rather have been found by one or both of the waitresses!

At least, at this point.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2014 7:31 PM Title: Ch. 10 'Star Struck'

Interesting chapter, but I'm a little confused.

Bob was in a resturant, and the same cart from that restuarant moved to a bedroom? Could you clarify that please?

Author's Response:

Well, some lounges, like the 'Fireside Lounge', have a Bar and and restaurant, with several motel rooms in the back.  Mostly used for 'special guests' like performers that are going to be there for a week or so at a time.  The room is provided for them while they are performing there, so that they can keep all their stuff with them right there.

 

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