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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

Please tell me the next chapter is about Bobby! What a cliffhanger!

Of all the outcomes, of all the hot women he could be with, he ended up in the trash die to his hesitation. Haha.

I wonder how do we move on from here though.

Does Bob find a fork and hikes to the top, and finds a supermodel eating at a nearby table?

Does Bob get taken out to to the dumpster, but cuts through, falls into the feet of the girl taking the trash?

Does Bob gets completely sticky in there, that he stays there until the garbage truck takes him to the local dump and a girl steps on it?

Does Diane freak out and demands the waitress the location, she finds the trash can ans Bobby is saved?

Does a teen carelessly drops her iphone into the trash can sticking to Bobby and this teen pulls her phone out with a new prize?

Does the waitress remember she felt something and checks the trash to find Bobby?

Does Valerie witness the whole situation and finds Bobby?

My challenge to you, midnight, is to have a new chapter not based off any of these ideas. (unless you already wrote it).

Good luck. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  Well, you had my wheels turning there, THEN, you said "NOT" to, 'use' those ideas? ;XD  Thanks!

Ha!  Bobby will get outta there somehow, I'm just not sure yet... how?

Reviewer: tylby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sandra will be participating in this history? I love her! :)



Author's Response:

Yes, Sandra will be back.  I can't say for sure, when...  She's reall-ly a complicated woman.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Superdude9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

An unaware ending! Gotta love it! So far this one is as good as the rest, and things could get very interesting from this point on. As for Mark...gotta feel a little jealousy over his current position!

Author's Response:

Thanks Dude!  Yeah, Mark and Tony thought that they were going to get lucky at the pig roast.  They bit off a little more than they could chew thou' with these two bio-techs, and now, their the ones that are praying that they will make it out of there alive!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

I will wildly guess that the hot waitress with the black tights will find him at the last second.*

*And, you'll notice I didn't say "bet," as I don't believe in on-line gambling. Even if chapter 10 does prove me right! ;-)

Author's Response:

I'll bet that 'Filo Beto' woulda made a bet on that one, Cary...   XD

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