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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter! I hope Mark was not actually swallowed and instread just saw the swallowing action in front of him. It really makes Chloe's point on who is in charge.

This chapter did not feel that long even though you mentioned it. Perhaps, I was just completely into it. (Thumbs up!)

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  Next chapter will continue right where this one left off, so... (hopefully Chloe didn't really swallow him alive?)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awesome update! Really sexy chapter. When you think about it, those two guys practically lost the rest of their lives just so two selfish girls could get little boy-toys...Its a little sad. I'm glad your exploring this more on Bobby's side of things, it adds a sence of realism to these stories. We on this site are all macrophiles so this kind of situation would be awesome for us, but I doubt too many people in the real world would be happy.

I don't even know if I, myself would be happy in this scenario if it was gonna be for the rest of my life! <<Something Bobby and I have in common since he was a gts-lover too until his life was turned into a real world gts story and he realized all the dangers and consequences of these things in real life. I don't even know why I started thinking about all these things all of a sudden. Anyway, great chapter, really liked it!



Author's Response:

Well, happy or not, their lives will never be the same again.  The realistic value, of the visual aspect, is really difficult to write, I think.  When the story constantly reminds the reader of the fact that everything around them is enormous.  A constant fear of being crushed, or squashed by the hands of a giantess with very little concern, if any at all, for them. Can take the reader right into story.  Give a little, from each perspective and try to take it up a step every chapter...

Thanks for the comment Gadget, I'm glad you liked it.  I've been thinking about these things for many years, and it never gets old, my friend!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

A shrunken men-age a quatre?!* That's got to be a first.


*Rough translation: "party of four."

Author's Response:

'Tis a first for Me!  thanks Cary!

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