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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

Definitely a cute mental image; Little Bobby and the "giant" panda. LOL!

And, the scene with Carly breaking down in tears (though, still w/o fessing up) was suitably poignant.

I can only hope that Di doesn't succumb to temptation and share her son-in-law's new existence with the dinner companion.

Author's Response:

Thanks Cary!  Next chapter will only be Jen and Tony, getting 'somewhat', reaquainted? ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

You know what, Im glad that these dialogue chapters are here setting up scenes in the future. I guess I was a little too anxious for some action.

For this chapter, I always enjoyed it when someone tries to hide something, but the other character already knows. Carly's stuttering is sure hinting that her mother knows the secret. Diane played it beautifully.

Author's Response:

You have to restrain yourself Tom!  Try taking some deep breathes, and counting backwards from one-hundred.     "0.0" - LOL!

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